you have had a bank account for a few years. Recently you received a letter from the bank stating that your account is $240 overdrawn and that you will he charged $70 which will he taken directly from your bank.explain what has happened and say what you would like them to do about it.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you regarding the letter that I have received.
this
letter was contain a piece of shocking news that I have taken $240 from my
bank
account
and you asked me to charge $70 to my
account
. If you check my documents you can realize that I have taken a loan from your
bank
to buy a car and it had  divided into 12 months and I had to pay its instalment over these months and the
last
day was the final instalment, so the
bank
overdrew $240 automatically,
,
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furthermore
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I ask you to check my case-history
account
.
Besides
,
last
night I sent an email again, but I didn't get any answer,
thus
my problem hasn't been solved,
therefore
I received your message about it frequently, but
this
error was made from your end because you
withdrawn
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$240
instead
of $200. I would be grateful if you resolve
this
difficulty which is yours and please inform me in
due to
I have had an
account
in your
bank
for 6 years and
this
complication hadn't occurred before. Your attention on
this
topic is urgently required, Yours faithfully, Tylor Gomez
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