The maps below show an industrial area in the town of norbiton, andplanned future development of the side.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparisons where relevant.

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The provided picture compares between industrial area for now and planned for the future in the town of Norbiton. As a general trend, it can be seen that the

circle

rood and the

road

which

connect

Correct subject-verb agreement

connects

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circle

Correct article usage

the circle

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road

are not changed

whereas

the others are added and removed. As the diagram suggests, the river will be separated

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into 2

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pieces and the

road

is built in the middle of the river and the housing is added near the river.

Also

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,Also

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all the factories are picked up but

playground

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the playground

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and 3 housing

and

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apply

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school are turned into

this areas

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this area

these areas

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which is the east side of

picture

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the picture

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Besides

, the mini

circle

are contracted in the middle of the long

road

and

also

medical

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a medical

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centre is built where between the big

circle

and mini

circle

and

also

opposite

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the opposite

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side of these are shops are made. What is more, the new

road

is built in the northwest

according to

circle

and the houses are erected in the

road’s

Change the noun form

roads

road

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around.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
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11Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

164 words

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Clear and correct grammar

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