The maps below show an industrial area in the town of norbiton, andplanned future development of the side.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparisons where relevant.

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The provided picture compares between industrial area for now and planned for the future in the town of Norbiton. As a general trend, it can be seen that the

circle

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rood and the

road

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which

connect

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connects

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circle

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the circle

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road

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are not changed

whereas

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the others are added and removed. As the diagram suggests, the river will be separated

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pieces and the

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is built in the middle of the river and the housing is added near the river.

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Also

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all the factories are picked up but

playground

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the playground

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and 3 housing

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apply

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school are turned into

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this areas

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this area

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which is the east side of

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the picture

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, the mini

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are contracted in the middle of the long

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and

also

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medical

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centre is built where between the big

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and mini

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and

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opposite

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side of these are shops are made. What is more, the new

road

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is built in the northwest

according to

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circle

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and the houses are erected in the

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road’s

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roads

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around.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words circle, road with synonyms.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

164 words

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The maps below show an industrial area in the town of norbiton, andplanned future development of the side.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparisons where relevant.

The population of major cities around the world is increasing very fastly. Why is this the case and what measures could be taken to solve this issue.

Parents and teachers make many rules for children to increase good behaviour and protect them from danger. However, children wood benefit from fever rules and greater freedom. To what extent do. You agree or disagree?

some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students to judge what is right and wrong so that they can behave well others say that teachers should only teach students academic subjects disduss both views and give your opinion.

some people say that fashion affects our lives in a negative way. However, others say that it has more positive effects on our lives. discuss both views and give your opinion.

The trend of increasing tourism causes environmental problems in many parts of the world. What are the main causes of pollution it creates? What can be done to reduce it?