The bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.

The bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The bar graph illustrates the different types of transport used to travel in European cities through three periods.
overall
Linking Words
, the most popular method of transportation to and from work in the sixties was by foot ;
however
Linking Words
, the percentage kept declining over the years . on the other hand , the least popular manner of transport in the sixties was the car ,but it kept surging during the years . in 1960 the better method of transportation to and from the job was by walking just over 30% of people used
this
Linking Words
approach .
while
Linking Words
the percentage kept plunging over the years .in the eighties ,only 15% of users used
this
Linking Words
type,and by a millennium ,
this
Linking Words
has dropped
further
Linking Words
to around 10% . the least famous manner of transport in the sixties was cars , but it kept increasing .in 1960 only 5% of people used cars, but by 1980
this
Linking Words
had grown to around 22% . By 2000 the percentage has risen to approximately 35%.
Submitted by mhmdkhlwd98 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: