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, it is extremely difficult to achieve and maintain a balance in the number of male and female Linking Words
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ability
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may lead to discriminating quality of Use synonyms
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, skills, abilities and achievements should be the most important and only standards. Entering a place where Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite