The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table compares the sources of funding for the police department between the years 2017 and 2018 in a place in Britain,
while
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the pie diagrams illustrate how the budgets were used.
It is clear that
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the national government was the main source of funding. We can
also
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see that the proportion of employee salaries had a decrease between the two years. Looking at the numbered table, funding from the national government made up the largest portion of the
budget
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, 175.5
million
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pounds
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in 2017, and with a slight increase, 177.8
million
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pounds
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in 2018. The local tax was
also
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a major contributor to the police
budget
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, the number went up by just over 10
million
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pounds
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from 2017 to 2018. The total amount of
budget
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went up by almost 14
million
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pounds
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in 2018.
According to
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the pie charts, the percentage of funding that went towards salaries shows a decline, from 75% to 69%. The amount of money that was spent on technology had increased. Though the percentages of the
budget
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for buildings and transport remained the same, the amount of money rose.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words budget, million, pounds with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fiscal allocations
  • Revenue streams
  • Budgetary oversight
  • Expenditure
  • Financial appropriation
  • Government grants
  • Local taxation
  • Operational costs
  • Capital investment
  • Public safety
  • Crime prevention
  • Community policing
  • Resource allocation
  • Year-on-year comparison
  • Budgetary constraints
  • Fiscal year
  • Fund disbursement
  • Budget deficit/surplus
  • Trend analysis
  • Financial sustainability
  • Law enforcement funding
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