The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data?

The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data?
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The charts provide information on types of nutrition in two different cuisines.
Overall
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, carbohydrates and protein were the two biggest nutrients in all cuisines.
Firstly
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, looking at the charts, carbohydrates were the biggest component in all meals.
While
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half of the
macaroni
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contains
this
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nutritional ingredient, medium baked
potato
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contained less of them, with just over a third.
Secondly
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,
in contrast
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to the previous finding, medium baked
potato
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contains more protein than its counterpart, at 25% vs 11% respectively.
Furthermore
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, similar to the previous result, the
potato
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had more glucose at 15%,
while
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macaroni
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contains only 11% of it, which is the same as its protein content. Meanwhile, looking at the other minor nutrients, all meals contain saturated fat.
However
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, despite both containing
this
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ingredient,
macaroni
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contains more than double at 21%,
while
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baked
potato
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only has 10% of it.
Furthermore
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, there are other micronutrients in both, with
macaroni
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at 5% and baked
potato
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at three times the amount.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "furthermore, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words macaroni, potato with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • nutritional consistency
  • carbohydrates
  • proteins
  • fats
  • vitamins
  • minerals
  • fiber
  • proportion
  • component
  • pie graph
  • comparison
  • significant
  • balance
  • healthy
  • dietary choices
  • implications
  • absent
  • presence
  • macro-nutrients
  • micro-nutrients
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