The three pie charts illustrate how many hours are spent in a British university library by undergraduates, postgraduates and the total student population.
The three pieces charts illustrate how many
hours
are spent in a library by undergraduates
, postgraduates
compared to other students
at British university.
It is clear that
postgraduates
spent more time in library than either undergraduates
or other students
. For example
, exactly one half of postgraduates
spent at least fifteen hours
in comparison with the average student. The figures were 51 per cent
and nine per cent
respectively. Furthermore
, only seventeen per cent
of postgraduates
spent between one and seven hours
, whereas
the average for all students
in this
category is a 50 per cent
. Meanwhile, the pattern for undergraduates
students
was substantially different. Most spent seven or more hours
( 91 per cent
). A minority of undergraduates
used the library for fifteen or more hours
per week.Submitted by dnm.best on
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