The bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The bar charts illustrate the worldwide
sales
of 4 kinds of digital
games
( mobile
phone
, online, console, and handheld
games
) by billions of
dollars
in 6 years.
Overall
, the graph shows growth in( mobile
phone
games
-online
games
, and handheld
games
) and a slight fall in console
games
. It is clear from the graph that the highest
sales
from 2000 to 2006 are handheld
games
, starting at around 11
billion
dollars
to reach almost 18
billion
dollars
.
Moreover
,
sales
increased slightly in online and mobile
phone
games
. Online game
sales
started at less than 1
billion
dollars
in 2001 before climbing to around 9
billion
dollars
in 2006.
While
mobile
phone
games
began in 2002 with almost 1
billion
dollars
and jumped to around 3
billion
dollars
in 2003 and kept growing to reach almost 7
billion
dollars
in 2006.
On the other hand
, we can see a slight decrease in console game
sales
, starting with 6
billion
dollars
in 2000 and ending with almost half of the
sales
in 2006.
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