It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science subject. đź”»What are causes? đź”»How can this situation be improved?

These days the
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fields
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study
are various. Most
of
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students are not choosing to
study
science
subject
in many countries.
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to not choose it . In
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essay , I will discuss what are the causes of
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argument and how can
this
situation be improved. First of all, science
subject
is the main
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during
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study
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but most
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student
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does not
orefer
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prefer
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to
study
for many reasons. It is a difficult
subject
. Most of them thought science
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difficult and they choose the easy
subject
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Lack of
  • Interest
  • Motivation
  • Perceived
  • Difficulty
  • Complexity
  • Limited
  • Career opportunities
  • Science field
  • Inadequate
  • Resources
  • Facilities
  • Education
  • Ineffective
  • Teaching methods
  • Uninspiring
  • Curriculum
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