Describe a house or an apartment you would like to live in. You should say: What it is like Where it would be Why you would like to live in this house/apartment And how you feel about this house/apartment
Many people want to have a modern
house
near the city center
. Change the spelling
centre
However
I want to have a small peaceful Add a comma
,However
house
near the city in Binh Chanh district. When you enter the house
you will see big
gate, surrounded by many Add an article
the big
a big
tres
. The Correct your spelling
trees
house
will have three bedroom
, a living room and a kitchen. The outside will be painted light blue. My bedroom will have a window facing the gardenChange to a plural noun
bedrooms
I
can catch the sun. The reason I want to live is because it is peaceful, the air is clean, no pollution. More importantly, I can watch the beautiful sunset with my family. In conclusion, Correct word choice
so I
this
will be the ideal place to come back after a tired day of work, take care of the plant and cook with parents
in Correct pronoun usage
your parents
this
house
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite