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The plans below show a student accommodation buildings 2010 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words.

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The two maps illustrate the changes in student accommodation buildings from 2010 until now. As we can see, there are a few differences between the past and present photos.
For example
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, a decreased garden around the building added new facilities and
bedrooms
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.
Initially
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, accommodation in 2010 had many open areas around the building and fewer
bedrooms
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.
For instance
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, there are three
bedrooms
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, one living room, a kitchen, and one shared bathroom, but they need a place for their cars.
While
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 now have five
bedrooms
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( one bedroom with En-suite, two
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 connected, and two private
bedrooms
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). Of course, they built a new bedroom in the garden next to the living room and replaced the living room with a bedroom.
Moreover
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, they have parking.
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