Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to a university education and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is sometimes believed that every

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have the right to study in

university

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and

governments

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should put in some

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to make it possible for every financial

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by paying all the educational fees. The former is reasonable,

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, I disagree that

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have a duty to make it free for everyone. I believe that people out there want to be treated equally in the educational environment by

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ceiling

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their financial background and

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have a duty to ensure every

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students

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student

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be able to access

in

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apply

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university

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and acquire degrees. The reason is that not only does

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university

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the university

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provide the

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students

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environment to sharpen their skill and expand their knowledge in career aspects, but

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improve their career prospect by giving

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internships. As

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result, that may bring loads of benefits to both

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and

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which allows

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to improve their financial status and

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eliminates

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the country

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country

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financial crises.

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, all the tuition fees paid by

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impossible.

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, that may distribute to several issues in educational systems,

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as

students

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might find no motivation to try their best at

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to gain

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scholarships and

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to a major source of distraction from

study

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.

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, paying all

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fees may cause

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apply

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bankrupt

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for the

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and

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burying their

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with loads of taxes.

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,

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instead

of providing

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apply

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free education for all

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apply

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students

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,

governments

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can set up some scholarships, which encourage the educational spirit in each

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students

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student

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and

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prevent the

governments

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from the risk of finance.