you recently ordered something online. When the the delivery cam it was not complete Write a letter to the company. In your letter: explain what you ordered and what was missing from your delivery explain the importance of this delivery ask for a replacement item to be sen

Dear sir/ma'am I am writing

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it is not what I ordered. So I ordered three items from your website which include matte sunscreen tube 20ml, Night cream and rose gold serum. There was a 25% sale going on your website and I explicitly remember that I ordered these three products as I'm travelling in four days and these are really my go-to items but noticed that my sunscreen was missing from the package I received yesterday As I mentioned, I am travelling in four days. I really need these items urgently because I will most likely need them when I'm on the go. My order number is 0643562 and my receipt number is PST084478.

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, I have attached the online-generated receipt as a reference. My billing address is the same so you can send the missed item there only,

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since I'm short on time here, you can send any water-based sunscreen available just in case what I ordered is out of stock. Looking forward to a positive response and my missed item Thank you Yours faithfully Hafsa Inam

haleemainam19

Aug 16, 2023

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

192 words

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you recently ordered something online. When the the delivery cam it was not complete Write a letter to the company. In your letter: explain what you ordered and what was missing from your delivery explain the importance of this delivery ask for a replacement item to be sen

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

A debate has arisen over whether the government should focus on supporting homeless people or implement other measures to address homelessness. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A friend of yours is living in another country. You would like to work in his/her country for a while. Write a letter to your friend and say Explain why you would like to work in his/her country Describe your skills and experience Ask for some information about working in his/her country.

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