The maps below shows Islip town center between the present and its future plan

The maps below shows Islip town center between the present and its future plan
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The two maps illustrate how a particular Islip town centre building will be changed between the current and future. 
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, there will be several extensive changes in that building in terms of modernisation and  construction.  One of the considerable changes in that building will be modernisation.    The New housing will be added southeast side of
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building . It is expected that 7 shops near to the main road on  the
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will be demolished to make way for several buildings
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as   Bus station,  shopping centre and New housing and
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  the main road will be  changed into way  only for pedestrians . The  Dual carriageway will be constructed around the countryside. Four buildings can remain unchanged from
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given
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one of them shops in the middle of
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and a car park, housing and  school which is on the 
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's south side .
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