The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given figure illustrates the generation of electricity in narrow pipe.
hydroelectric
grid station. Correct article usage
a hydroelectric
Overall
, we observe there are two mechanisms being performed in a power station. One during daytime in which electricity is produced. Linking Words
While
the other in nighttime during which Linking Words
water
is pumped to Use synonyms
high level
Add a hyphen
high-level
storages
.
Fix the agreement mistake
storage
To begin
with, we see a large dam is built next to Linking Words
river
, the Add an article
the river
a river
water
from Use synonyms
river
comes to Add an article
the river
reservoir
and is stored there. In Add an article
the reservoir
a reservoir
next
step, there is an intake door, in Correct article usage
the next
morning
Add an article
the morning
its
open Correct your spelling
it's
whereas
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in
night Change preposition
at
its
closed. The Replace the word
it's
it is
water
flows from Use synonyms
intake
and approaches towards Correct article usage
the intake
generator
to generate electricity. Reversible turbines are seen, Correct article usage
the generator
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however
during Add a comma
,however
Add an article
the day
day
they operate generators. Add a comma
,day
Nevertheless
in the Linking Words
dark
they help in pumping Add a comma
,dark
water
to Use synonyms
reservoir
.
Add an article
a reservoir
the reservoir
In addition
, the huge generators located in Linking Words
power
station are Add an article
the power
further
connected to power lines that Linking Words
goes
Change the verb form
go
till
Change preposition
to
national
grid. Correct article usage
the national
Lastly
, there is one more reservoir on Linking Words
small
level. The Add an article
a small
water
is stored there and Use synonyms
in
nighttime with the help of turbines is sent toChange preposition
at
Add an article
the
a
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