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Some people feel that manufactures and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

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amount
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 of packed stuff has lately become a debatable topic whether manufacturing and selling companies are responsible for that or the customers should ensure not to buy
such
 products .
According to
 my
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prospective
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both
 should take
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the neccessary
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neccessary
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necessary
 steps to do so .
Both
 viewpoints
along with
 my opinion are discussed in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin
 with, some groups of folks said that the makers and supermarkets should ensure that they keep more options of
non packaged
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 materials
such
 as lentils and other edible products which are not
neccessarily
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necessarily
 need to be packed rather than having only packaging items on their shelves . To add on , they can even encourage the buyers to bring their own recyclable bags by giving some extra discounts or
may be
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 some lucrative offers .
On the other hand
 , some believe that purchasers can bring a noticeable change by avoiding substances with a lot of packaging .
This
 is based on less demand , less production strategy. If the manufacturers will not get an appropriate amount of profit , they will definitely stop making
such
 stuff .
Furthermore
,
this
 will need educating and spreading awareness among customers about the negatives of packed materials
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 of using organic , raw and recycled stuff.
To conclude
this
 , I opine that to make effective change
both
 parties should come together . Manufacturing companies and superstores should think beyond profits
as well as
 customers should
also
 become aware of their duty towards their health
as well as
 towards
environment
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 as these
both
 are affected by using a lot of packaging goods.
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