The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and the planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 Words
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The two maps depict an industrial area
that is
part of a town called Norbiton. One shows its current state and the other shows what it is expected to look like after a proposed development. Many changes are expected to occur, with factories being turned into homes and the addition of various buildings.
At present, this
industrial area is comprised of a number of factories surrounding a roundabout and road. It is bordered to the north by a river, on the other side of which is farmland. The town itself lies to the west.
However
, after the development, those factories will either be demolished or turned into housing. Various amenities will also
be built. There will be a school in the east, with a playground, a medical centre, and some shops also
added. The road network will be expanded somewhat, with a bridge crossing the river and housing built on the other side, as well as
westward expansion towards the town.Submitted by sprindy.liu on
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