As countries have developed there has been a trend towards smaller family sizes. Why does this happen? How does this affect society?

In the
last
few decades, we have witnessed a huge amount of progress in some countries
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to a considerable diminish in procreation. There are a number of reasons to make several areas low-population.
Firstly
, nowadays women are more independent in comparison to the past, and they prefer to make decisions based on their interests rather than traditional norms.
Also
, as people are more educated they are aware of protection ways which are very important to prevent giving birth to ill
children
.
Besides
, it is profitable for preparing a proper environment in
family
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the family
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in several aspects
such
as educational opportunities and financial situation.
For instance
, a small family's members can spend more time with each other and parents can afford more facilities for their
children
. Obviously, declined population can be considered a problem faced by societies.
Initially
, if families continue to focus on having 1 or 2
children
or even some of them want a family without
children
,
this
results in a shortage of young labour which is necessary to strengthen the economic foundations for governments.
Secondly
, that region with no youngster generation would be judged as an old, inefficient, and even useless place. As a case in point, today, Germany is a country with a few number of workers that have to hire its required manpower from
another countries
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. By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my opinion
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this
subject.
Nevertheless
, having a small family has numerous
advantageous
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for
children
,
it
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but it
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has some drawbacks for society.
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