As countries have developed there has been a trend towards smaller family sizes. Why does this happen? How does this affect society?

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few decades, we have witnessed a huge amount of progress in some countries

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to a considerable diminish in procreation. There are a number of reasons to make several areas low-population.

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, nowadays women are more independent in comparison to the past, and they prefer to make decisions based on their interests rather than traditional norms.

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, as people are more educated they are aware of protection ways which are very important to prevent giving birth to ill

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, it is profitable for preparing a proper environment in

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in several aspects

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as educational opportunities and financial situation.

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, a small family's members can spend more time with each other and parents can afford more facilities for their

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. Obviously, declined population can be considered a problem faced by societies.

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, if families continue to focus on having 1 or 2

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or even some of them want a family without

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results in a shortage of young labour which is necessary to strengthen the economic foundations for governments.

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, that region with no youngster generation would be judged as an old, inefficient, and even useless place. As a case in point, today, Germany is a country with a few number of workers that have to hire its required manpower from

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. By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my opinion

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, having a small family has numerous

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has some drawbacks for society.

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As countries have developed there has been a trend towards smaller family sizes. Why does this happen? How does this affect society?

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Many countries have the same shops and products. Some consider it a positive development, whereas others consider it negative. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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