You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer.
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Bernard
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Room
209. At the moment, I'm
sharing the room
with another student called Alex. The reason I write this
letter to you is because some
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problems
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facing while
I'm
living in this
room
. First of all, I don't find it comfortable to share a room
with a messy person. Alex doesn't keep his stuffs
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although
I helped him to arrange his stuffs
most of the time. Personally, Change the wording
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problem affects my work because I find it difficult to find my stuffs
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facing is the room
is too small for 2 people to live in. I have to squeeze all of my stuffs
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,problems
m
facing, I would like to move to a new room
. If the circumstance is possible, I would prefer to live alone so I don't have to mind my roommate
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the type of person that value
time really much. Thank you.
Best regards,
Bernard.Correct subject-verb agreement
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.