Does both side and give your opinion airlines cost become less cost some think it is a negative development while others think it is a positive development

In modern days, the
airlines
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cost has become less expensive than before.
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phenomenon has
a positive consequences
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positive consequences
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such
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transffering
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transferring
of knowledge
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any place around the world and increasing tourism, others feel that it is a bad situation because some
countries
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will become overcrowded. Less
costation
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constipation
for airlines
it
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is a good and
a
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successful phenomenon.
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phenomenon leads to prosperity for nations, the tourism has increased around the world .
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, in the
Netherlands
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the number of tourists increased in the
last
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10 years which leads to more profit and more
incomes
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.
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, knowledge transformation has become much easier, like painting, and
archtictures
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architecture
architectures
.
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, Arabic
countries
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, like Doupe built the highest touir when they saw evil touir in Parise .so if the airline's prices decline
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discovering
of
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the knowledge of different nations will become easier and adopting the one you prefer will become easier .
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to,these positive impact there is a negative side
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it as many
countries
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will be crowded.
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number
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of tourists will be increased so some
countries
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will suffer from traffic transportation, especially these
countries
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that
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there
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roads are not well
desigined
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designed
but have many historical places to visit.
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, Egypt country is full of historical places to visit but their roads are not suitable to make transportation there easy.many
citizen
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and tourists are
complaning
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complaining
from
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traffic congestion. In conclusion, as
any
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side there are drow backs and positive
side
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for
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loss cost airlines the drow backs are
the
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crowded and
the
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positive are more prosperity to nations and
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knowledge
knowldge
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knowledge
transformations

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