many people hold the view that it better to buy their home rather than rent it.do you agree with this statement or not ?

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Many people think that it is better for us to have a
house
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instead
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of renting it.
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, there are still some people arguing with opinion.
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, I will introduce my view
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this
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issue in
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essay. On the one hand, it is a good idea to rent a
house
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for a short time. Indeed, if you decide to be
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in living a
house
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when you study at your school or have a business, it will save you lots of money to pay for your priorities
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as studying, eating, investing and so on.
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, if you don't have enough money to buy a
house
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, renting it is absolutely suitable for your budget compared to buying a
house
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.
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, it is not a bad idea to live in
hostel
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for a short time.
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, if you have to have a family or work for a long time, you should pay
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house
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. Paying
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house
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will make you comfortable when you live in your
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although
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it will be very expensive. To exemplify, when you have a
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, you have more space to study, work and entertain.
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, you have to have a family when you grow up, so having a
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also
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supply
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big
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space for your family to live. Thereby, having a
house
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is a good idea for yourself and your family despite its high cost. In conclusion, I’m of my opinion to say that having a
house
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is necessary when you live
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somewhere for many years because you can concentrate on enhancing your skills to have a better position in your job and taking care of your family well in spite of
expensive
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the expensive
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cost.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • property ladder
  • mortgage
  • rental agreement
  • down payment
  • equity
  • appreciate
  • rental market
  • monthly installments
  • credit score
  • repairs and maintenance
  • landlord
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