Your child is going on a trip to a nature reserve organised by a local youth club. The club leader is looking for parents to travel with the group and you will like to go. Write a letter to the leader of the youth club. In your letter Say why you want to go on the trip Describe what you could do to help during the trip

Dear Sir or Madam, I got to know about the trip which you organized and looking for the parents to join. I am keenly interested
to become
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part of
this
tour
along with
my kid. There are several reasons to come with you and there are offerings by my side to help you, which are being explained in upcoming paragraphs. The first and foremost reason is that my child insisted I participate in
this
. After considering his request, I made the plan to be with it.
In addition
, I remained a student of nature since my childhood and love to see and notice deeply the attributes and types of natural reserves.
Furthermore
, I strongly believe in learning and it could be a great opportunity for me to absorb new things from the almighty.
For instance
, there might be new plants coming across in today's life or
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new species of plants and woods.
Moreover
, I can be a helping hand for you and your group to serve you in several ways.
For example
, if you give me the responsibility to take care
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the kids
while
visiting any specific place.
Additionally
, I expect that you might plan any museum related to
this
field and we are supposed to visit it.
Although
you will be
along with
us ,
however
, you can render any sort of reliability to me.
Besides
this
, I can serve food or drinks to children when or wherever needed, which will be a great assistance for you. Yours faithfully, Omer
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