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The pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made . Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

#pictures #show #tomato #ketchup #information #features
These pictures illustrate how
tomato
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a tomato
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 is produced,
packaging
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the packaging
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 process it is made. There are 15 stages in
diagram
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the diagram
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, from
pick
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picking
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tomatoes
 in
garden
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the garden
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,
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apply
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 to enjoying
with
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apply
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fast
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the fast
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 foot at home
orstore
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or store
.
The first step is
 that the
tomatoes
 are picked and the classify
tomatoes
 as good or bad so that the ketchup is of
a
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apply
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high standard
tomatoes
 are continuously delivered to factories where they are removed some unnecessary parts included
removing
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removed
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 stalks, skin,
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and seads
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seads
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seeds
seats
. After storage in the box,
tomatoes
 are ground into liquid. At
this
 point, seasonings are added.
The next step is
 that the liquid &
boiled
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is boiled
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 and
then
 left
about
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for about
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 & hours in order to get
a
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the
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 right temperature. It is
then
 poured into mussels and
labeled
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labelled
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.
Befored
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Before
 being packed into boxes, the bottles are checked
quality
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for quality
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.
Following
this
, these boxes are loaded
on to
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onto
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 lorries, which take them to supermarkets the final step is that you buy a bottle of
tomatoes
 ketchup and enjoying with fast food
as
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such as
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hamburger
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hamburgers
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 & or fries.
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