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Nowadays, distance-learning programs have gained in popularity, but some people argue that online courses can never be taken as good as those taken at a college or university in person. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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 learning is now a day going popular. Most people prefer
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 learning and taking online courses over learning in college. In
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 learning is better than onside learning. First of ,all I agree that online learning through different course platforms like Coursera , Udemy and Digiskills
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 much good quality skill learning than onsite learning. In ,college we can only learn those courses which are relevant to our studies we can learn but in online ,learning we can pick and finish courses and
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 get certification in a short period of time.
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, learning from online platforms is become popular because of some reasons which is discuss that we can seek education whenever we want. there is no time restriction. If we discuss which one is better. So, I can strongly say that online learning is very good. If we conclude
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 discussion. So, online learning from different platforms is much better than learning onside. But if we get a degree
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 onside learning is better. Because we work on some more
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 like presentation
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, people management
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 and financial management
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 which we cannot get in
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 learning. Thanks for reading.
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