The graph below shows information on employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005. Summarise the information by choosing and describe the main idea, and make comparisons where appropriate.

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the information on employment

rates

across six different countries in the

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1995 and 2005. To summarize,

the

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empolyment

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employment

unemployment

rates

in both

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years,

Iceland

stood first for

male

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males

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and

Switzerland

for

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Females

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. In the year 1995, the employment

rates

in

Iceland

for

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males

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and In

Switerland

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Switzerland

for

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females

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was 70% and 65% respectively

where

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thats

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that's

the highest,

whereas

in Uk and

Australia

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approximately 55%

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males

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are employed

likewise

in

Switzerland

and New Zealand with 25% each

are

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least witnessed.

Further

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males

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Switzerland

, New Zealand and

USA

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the USA

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were between the values

similary

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similarly

similar

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females

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Switzerland

,

Iceland

and

USA

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. In the year 2005, the employment

rates

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rate

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for

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males

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in

Iceland

remains first

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82% and for

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Switerland

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Switzerland

consistanly

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consistently

improved to 78%.

However

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other countries are margined with

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minimum of 68%. On the

flipside

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,

for

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female

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females

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other

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in other

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countries ranges between 78% and 38%.