The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population age 65 and above in three countries.

The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population age 65 and above in three countries.
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table illustrates the percentage of citizens aged 65 and above in Canada,
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and England from 1998 to 2030.
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it is clear that
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the proportion of the population is increasing
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all the time in every country.
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, it is predicted that the number of people living in these countries will be increased by around 10% in 2030 than 1998.
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Germany
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has the highest number of citizens in all these years,
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the UK has the lowest.
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, the upgrade in the proportion of the population in the UK increases slightly more than in other countries.
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,
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and Canada show the same pattern of growth in the count of civilians. Though,
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1998 Canada showed the rate as 16%,
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the difference between these countries in the same year was 4%. In 2030 it is expected that the number of civilians living in
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will be 10% higher than England nationals, at 30%.
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