The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The table illustrates the
rates
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of what
men
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and
women
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who do not work did in their time in the previous year in the United Kingdom.
Overall
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, the majority of
women
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spent their
mornings
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doing Housework,
while
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the largest segment of
men
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chose to use morning time to find a job.
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, none of the
women
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did sports or stayed in bed in the afternoons and a tiny proportion of
men
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drank in the
mornings
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. It is obvious that seeking a job was the priority of most unemployed males as 22% the first part of the day searching for work,
in contrast
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to females around half of them spent their
mornings
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doing housework.
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, the
rates
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for
men
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and
women
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who preferred to do morning shopping are close to 20% for the first and 26% for the latter.
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, both genders showed very small
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for morning and afternoon drinking only 2% of
men
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drank in the
mornings
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and 3% in the afternoon,
while
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1% of
women
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drank in the
mornings
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and afternoons. The social life of non-working males was very humble as only 6% visited their friends and relatives in the morning and no more than 12% in the afternoons ,
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women
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were more active as the
rates
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were 10% and 17% respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "moreover, while".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words rates, men, women, mornings with synonyms.
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