The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The table illustrates the
rates
of what Use synonyms
men
and Use synonyms
women
who do not work did in their time in the previous year in the United Kingdom.
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Overall
, the majority of Linking Words
women
spent their Use synonyms
mornings
doing Housework, Use synonyms
while
the largest segment of Linking Words
men
chose to use morning time to find a job. Use synonyms
Moreover
, none of the Linking Words
women
did sports or stayed in bed in the afternoons and a tiny proportion of Use synonyms
men
drank in the Use synonyms
mornings
.
It is obvious that seeking a job was the priority of most unemployed males as 22% the first part of the day searching for work, Use synonyms
in contrast
to females around half of them spent their Linking Words
mornings
doing housework. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the Linking Words
rates
for Use synonyms
men
and Use synonyms
women
who preferred to do morning shopping are close to 20% for the first and 26% for the latter. Use synonyms
Moreover
, both genders showed very small Linking Words
rates
for morning and afternoon drinking only 2% of Use synonyms
men
drank in the Use synonyms
mornings
and 3% in the afternoon, Use synonyms
while
1% of Linking Words
women
drank in the Use synonyms
mornings
and afternoons.
The social life of non-working males was very humble as only 6% visited their friends and relatives in the morning and no more than 12% in the afternoons , Use synonyms
while
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women
were more active as the Use synonyms
rates
were 10% and 17% respectively.Use synonyms
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