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You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your latter •Explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months •Say how your work could be done while you are away •Ask for his/her help in arranging it

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dear sir my name is SumanPreet Kaur and I am working for your company for five years. I am writing
this
 letter to show my interest in working at its head office for at least six months as
this
 company has six different head offices in India, Japan, Africa, Australia, New Zealand, and Germany. as I mentioned its been the
last
 five years since I am working in the same department , now I want to upgrade my professional skills
as well as
 marketing skills for better performance. I can manage my work through emails Kindly talk to the higher authorities and arrange for my overseas transfer Looking forward to hearing a positive reply from your end. yours faithfully Suman Preet Kaur
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