The graph below shows the wheat export of three different areas from 1985 to 1990

The graph below shows the wheat export of three different areas from 1985 to 1990
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graph illustrates the
exportation
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of
wheat
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in
Australia
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,
Canada
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and the
European
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community
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between 1985 and 1990.
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, it can be seen that,
initially
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,
Canada
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was the highest exporter of
wheat
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while
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Australia
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was the least.
Canada
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experienced fluctuations during the
period
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and
Australia
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decreased over time. The
European
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community
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rose significantly getting to the end of the
period
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by overtaking
Canada
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. In 198,
Canada
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exported approximately 20
wheats
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.
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in 1986, it declined slightly to almost 15. The
exportation
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of
wheat
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rose gradually to 25 between 1987 and 1988.
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, it reached a dip in 1989 at around 15.
Australia
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was the least in the
wheat
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export from start at 15. It overtook the
European
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community
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in the
exportation
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of
wheat
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at just over 15 before decreasing steadily throughout the end of the
period
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. The second largest export of
wheat
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was the
European
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community
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starting off with just over 15. In 1986, it became the lowest exporter with around 14. Between 1987 and 1988, the
wheat
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export rose slightly and remained relatively the same. During the
period
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of 1989 and 1990, the
exportation
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of
wheat
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in the
European
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community
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rose significantly by overtaking that of
Canada
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from 15 to just over 20
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Vocabulary: Replace the words exportation, wheat, australia, canada, european, community, period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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