You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meetings said that they loked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter say what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in the future

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DEAR SIR I am Suman Preet Kaur from Amritsar, on 17th of July we had organised all day meeting at your motel. I am writing
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letter to inform you to make some improvements to your hostel because your resort is near to our company.
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, we are planning our upcoming events at your inn.
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, I would like to tell you about the feedback which we got from our guests , they like the ambience of your tavern .
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, they like the furniture , interior , cleanliness, and well-maintained staff of your lodging.
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, I am very disappointed with your meal services. as the meat was not properly served to the members. Few people have complained that the many bread items were stale and not up to the mark.
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, The quantity and quality of cooking was very low. I request you to make some changes to your foodstuff for the betterment of your hotel. like , preparing the menu for parties
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the number of guests.
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, there will be no shortage and pilferage of food will happen, use good quality cuisine products. I hope you will work on my request. yours faithfully SumanPreet Kaur
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