some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. discuss both views and give you opinion.

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think

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of tertiary education should allocate all their

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to studying their

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some other

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believe that they can learn additional

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other than their main

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of

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. As long as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion and I think it is beneficial for

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to be open to learning new

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and skills, so in the subsequent

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I will discuss my own view and the opponent's view as well. Most

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start their

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education when they are young and fresh, they have a keen on learning new

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and they have the potential for it too so many of them spend some

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to learn

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other than their main

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. I think it is an advantageous approach since that special age ables them to learn

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and skills as fast as possible and provides them with

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capabilities that will be useful for their future career or social relationships.

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, there are so many experiences that would not be taught in

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courses and are key elements

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success in the real world outside of the

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, when I was 18 years old I entered

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to

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law, at the same

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I started photography as a hobby and learned a lot about it, finishing my tertiary education as a graduated law student, I was a professional photographer as

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which helped me a lot to find more job opportunities and broadened my prospects.

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, some

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believe that

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should spend all their

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on their main

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of

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.

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point of view is supported by some reasons. It is possible that spending more

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and energy on your

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as a

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student would lead you to a deeper knowledge of that

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and helps you to become a professional who knows all the aspects of a certain subject. Of course, better knowledge which can be gained by more allocated

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and energy would provide

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with better academic and professional opportunities and benefits them but

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does not mean that one should be deprived of other kinds of knowledge or skill.

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, I believe that

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it is good to spend a considerable

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to

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your own

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as a

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student, it should not bind you from learning more

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and gaining better qualifications,

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management could help

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to spend enough

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and energy on their main

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of

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and learn otheR skills or

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to gain more experiences and capabilities which would benefit them as an adult in their professional career or personal life.