some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. discuss both views and give you opinion.

Some

people

think

students

of tertiary education should allocate all their

time

to studying their

field

while

some other

people

believe that they can learn additional

subjects

other than their main

field

of

study

. As long as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion and I think it is beneficial for

university

students

to be open to learning new

subjects

and skills, so in the subsequent

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I will discuss my own view and the opponent's view as well. Most

people

start their

university

education when they are young and fresh, they have a keen on learning new

subjects

and they have the potential for it too so many of them spend some

time

to learn

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subjects

other than their main

field

of

study

. I think it is an advantageous approach since that special age ables them to learn

subjects

and skills as fast as possible and provides them with

such

capabilities that will be useful for their future career or social relationships.

In addition

, there are so many experiences that would not be taught in

university

courses and are key elements

through

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success in the real world outside of the

university

.

For example

, when I was 18 years old I entered

university

to

study

law, at the same

time

I started photography as a hobby and learned a lot about it, finishing my tertiary education as a graduated law student, I was a professional photographer as

well

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which helped me a lot to find more job opportunities and broadened my prospects.

On the other hand

, some

people

believe that

students

should spend all their

time

on their main

field

of

study

.

This

point of view is supported by some reasons. It is possible that spending more

time

and energy on your

study

as a

university

student would lead you to a deeper knowledge of that

field

and helps you to become a professional who knows all the aspects of a certain subject. Of course, better knowledge which can be gained by more allocated

time

and energy would provide

students

with better academic and professional opportunities and benefits them but

this

does not mean that one should be deprived of other kinds of knowledge or skill.

to sum up

, I believe that

while

it is good to spend a considerable

time

to

study

your own

field

as a

university

student, it should not bind you from learning more

subjects

and gaining better qualifications,

time

management could help

students

to spend enough

time

and energy on their main

field

of

study

and learn otheR skills or

subjects

in addition

to gain more experiences and capabilities which would benefit them as an adult in their professional career or personal life.