You recenlty organized a party for your company at a hotel. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter describe the party and how it went explain why you were pleased with the hotel's service suggest some improvements that the hotel could make

Dear Sir or Madam, Greetings, I am writing

this

letter to you with regard to the latest party you organized, I am so delighted to inform you that it was a remarkable event,

additionally

, you made me proud of my appearance on

this

occasion

between

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my colleagues.

Firstly

, the buffet service was excellent, all

plats

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plates

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were delicious and fresh.

Secondly

, you followed my instructions about vegetarian meals, and

as a result

of

this

everybody was pleased and satisfied.

Moreover

, drinks were

flavourable

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favourable

whether hot or cold with

the

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mixed fresh fruit.

Finally

, your staff are welcoming and cooperative every single touch showed how much you are professional. It is a matter of fact that there is nothing perfect everything could need some

improvments

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improvements

improvement

even though the service you provided was sufficient and ideal, I would like to suggest that women's bathrooms need additional care

such

as extra cleaning tools and lighted mirrors. I would like to thank

so

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much

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for you

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you

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your

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exhibited high-quality and professional services. Yours sincerely, John Adam.