Some people think that the range of technology available to people is increasing the gap between the rich and the poor. Others think it has the opposite effect. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While

there is an increasing concern that technological advances

increase

the

gap

between the affluent and the poor people, some people argue that technological change

narrow

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this

gap

.

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as well as

state my opinion

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the former

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. On the one hand, technology exacerbates between the wealthy and the poor. Technological advancements might lead to job replacements in some current areas. The demand for highly-skill workers in some fields

such

as artificial intelligence or data analysis

increase

whilst lower-skilled jobs may see reduced demand.

As a result

, people who do monotonous and repetitive jobs will lose their jobs and result in

income

inequalities.

Furthermore

, the limited access to technology among the disadvantaged

hinder

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them from benefiting

technological

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from technological

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advancements. Many technological products are prohibitively expensive and only the rich can afford to buy them.

On the other hand

, proponents of the opposing view contend that technological advancements are reducing

income

inequality.

Technological

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change enables all individuals, irrespective

socioeconomic

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of socioeconomic

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background, to access education and services

with

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affordable

price

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.

Consequently

, the poor

also

have a better chance of landing a high-paid job, leading to increased

income

and a higher living

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standard.

In addition

, technological advances

increase

productivity in

wide

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a wide

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range of fields.

This

might lead to the demand for

job

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jobs

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in many industrial zones

increase

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and the poor can improve their

income

. In conclusion, certain innovations in technology might bridge the

gap

between the rich and the poor,

while

certain developments help us to narrow down

this

gap

and make our lives better.