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Many people believe that the current system of both teachers and students in the classroom will no longer exist by the year 2050. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?

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Technology
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 has been proven as a blessing for the whole world. Over
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people say that
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teaching. I totally agree with
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shed light on both views in the upcoming paragraphs. Elaborating above, As far as
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 am concerned that online study is making popular
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 the whole globe so , in
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 try to opt for online courses because they do not have to go through in-person classes which ultimately makes them happy
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 for better preparation for their studies.
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, teachers can make
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 they are free and if they miss any class
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 they are no way to worry because online lessons get recorded to recover everything that they missed it.
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 will be better acclimated with
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 as getting good knowledge about some applications about which they are not known
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, nowadays tutors are providing paid materials and online live sessions anywhere in the world.
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 opine that
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 comes with an influx of benefits and ,
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 it will diminish the classrooms which are very established
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • virtual reality
  • augmented reality
  • traditional teaching methods
  • personalized learning
  • AI (Artificial Intelligence)
  • global connectivity
  • online platforms
  • obsolete
  • sustainability
  • carbon footprint
  • digital classrooms
  • economic factors
  • maintaining physical school buildings
  • online learning environments
  • social interaction
  • practical learning experiences
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