The bar chart shows the top ten countires for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and make comparison where relevant.
The chart illustrates the most favourite countries for the
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consumption
of electricity in 2014. Use synonyms
Overall
, China and Linking Words
United
States have Correct article usage
the United
a
highest Change the article
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rank
for that two aspects.
China got Use synonyms
a
first Correct article usage
the
rank
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of
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electricity's
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electricity
production
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consumption
which got 5398 Use synonyms
billion
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kWh
for Use synonyms
production
and 5322 Use synonyms
billion
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kWh
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consumption
. The second Use synonyms
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United
States, which got 4099 Correct article usage
the United
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kWh
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production
and 3866 Use synonyms
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kWh
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Consumption
. Meanwhile, Use synonyms
Republic
of Korea Correct article usage
the Republic
have
the lowest Change the verb form
has
rank
got Use synonyms
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ten times lower than China which got 485.1 Correct the article-noun agreement
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billion
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kWh
for Use synonyms
production
and 449.5 Use synonyms
billion
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kWh
for Use synonyms
consumption
.
Unlike other countries, Germany Use synonyms
have
a higher expenditure rather than construction. It clearly be seen that Germany got Change the verb form
has
a
582.5 Correct article usage
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billion
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kWh
for expenditure and 526.6 Use synonyms
billion
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kWh
for construction. Russia, Japan, and India have Use synonyms
the
similar number, which got almost one thousand in both aspects. Meanwhile, Canada, France, and Brazil got under five Correct article usage
a
hundreds
in that two conditions.Change to singular
hundred
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