The bar chart shows the top ten countires for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and make comparison where relevant.
The chart illustrates the most favourite countries for the
production
and consumption
of electricity in 2014. Overall
, China and United
States have Correct article usage
the United
a
highest Change the article
the
rank
for that two aspects.
China got a
first Correct article usage
the
rank
of
Change preposition
in
electricity's
Change noun form
electricity
production
and consumption
which got 5398 billion
kWh
for production
and 5322 billion
kWh
for consumption
. The second rank
goes to United
States, which got 4099 Correct article usage
the United
billion
kWh
for production
and 3866 billion
kWh
for Consumption
. Meanwhile, Republic
of Korea Correct article usage
the Republic
have
the lowest Change the verb form
has
rank
got a
ten times lower than China which got 485.1 Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
billion
kWh
for production
and 449.5 billion
kWh
for consumption
.
Unlike other countries, Germany have
a higher expenditure rather than construction. It clearly be seen that Germany got Change the verb form
has
a
582.5 Correct article usage
apply
billion
kWh
for expenditure and 526.6 billion
kWh
for construction. Russia, Japan, and India have the
similar number, which got almost one thousand in both aspects. Meanwhile, Canada, France, and Brazil got under five Correct article usage
a
hundreds
in that two conditions.Change to singular
hundred
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