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Learning English at school is often seen as important than learning loacl languages .if these are not taught may many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to insure the survival of local language and if so how?

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Nowadays, it can be seen that many people learn the
English
language
 rather than
the
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 native
language
. They think
English
 is most important for them.
On the other hand
 , if
native
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language
not
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 taught at schools. These many wipe out. In
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 the questions and give my opinion. To commence with, the importance of
English
 is very crucial. In
this
 modern era,
this
language
 is used
by
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 every field of life
for example
, if anybody wants to go abroad, for higher education so it is essential for him to learn the
English
language
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 applying to foreign universities.
Likewise
, there are more needs in various ways to learn the
English
language
.
Moreover
, in
Pakistan
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 almost all syllabi are translated into the
English
languages
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language
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 like science, subjects and other arts subjects
such
 as Pak study and geography, et cetera, so learning
English
 in
such
 kinds of countries using necessary.
Furthermore
, talking about the survival of the native
language
 as we know, the local
language
 is part of the culture of any
country
, so
therefore
 we should try to conserve the native
languages
.
In addition
, culture and tradition are very important to a
country
. A
country
 can see his local
language
 by writing books poem's and poetry in that
language
further
 a
country
 can do is translate foreign
language
 literature into the local
language
 In conclusion, both have their own importance, so as
English
 is the need in the same way, local
languages
 are
also
 important we can save the local
languages
 by following the given steps in the previous paragraphs.
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