The map belows shows the industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned futrure development of the site.

The map belows shows the industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned futrure development of the site.
The top map shows the Norbiton industrial
area
as it is currently, and the bottom one shows it as it will be after the development has been completed.
Overall
, the key point to note is that
although
there will be many changes, particularly concerning the new buildings and the
roads
, substantial parts of
this
area
is
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going to remain largely the same and after redevelopment, the new Norbiton
area
will be a mixture of the original and the old. Looking at the changes in more detail we can see that a new roundabout will be built to the south of the original one, replacing the old junction. To the northwest and to the north of the old main roundabout, new
roads
will be constructed. The latter one is supposed to go across the river to the farmland. In terms of the new buildings,
housings
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will replace the old factories near the
roads
. A shop and a medical centre will be right next to the central roundabout. A new school will be set up on the right of the map, and to the left of ,it there will be a playground. Turning to the unchanged part it is noteworthy that
large
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part of
this
area
will not change at all. These include all current
roads
, the town in the west, and river and
farm land
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farmland
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in the north of
this
area
.
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