Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists, but not local people. Why this is the case? What can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?

The majority of historical
places
and museums are mostly visited by
people
who travel and local
people
do not go to
such
places
. The reason for
this
can be that
such
places
are common for locals and
also
they are not advertised among citizens at all. First of all, the reason for the lack of
people
’s attraction to the sites of a city can be that they are acquainted with them.
For example
,
people
who live in a city with a lot of ancient and interesting sites already know them, because they see them every week or maybe even every day
due to
the fact that they work, live and commute in
this
area. So, it gives citizens a sense of knowing
such
places
,
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they have never visited intentionally.
Such
places
do not have enough value for
people
who are surrounded by them and local
people
take them for granted. The interest in local attractions can be increased by the promotion of these
places
for native
people
.
For instance
, tourists during the organization of their trip see and face a lot of advertisements of national sites and museums, that’s why they are so interested in visiting them. The same actions can be done for local
people
. By giving them information about
places
like galleries or museums and explaining how interesting they are, citizens with
this
knowledge are more likely to visit
such
places
. AD on national channels or banners in residential buildings can be taken into consideration to increase the attendance of local
people
in famous
places
of a city. In conclusion, the rise of interest in major tourist attractions among local
people
can be achieved by promoting
such
places
. Giving
people
knowledge of how interesting local
places
can be will boost the numbers of visitors, especially native ones.
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