Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists, but not local people. Why this is the case? What can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?

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The majority of historical
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and museums are mostly visited by
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who travel and local
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do not go to
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places
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. The reason for
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can be that
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are common for locals and
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they are not advertised among citizens at all. First of all, the reason for the lack of
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’s attraction to the sites of a city can be that they are acquainted with them.
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,
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who live in a city with a lot of ancient and interesting sites already know them, because they see them every week or maybe even every day
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the fact that they work, live and commute in
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area. So, it gives citizens a sense of knowing
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they have never visited intentionally.
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places
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do not have enough value for
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who are surrounded by them and local
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take them for granted. The interest in local attractions can be increased by the promotion of these
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for native
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.
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, tourists during the organization of their trip see and face a lot of advertisements of national sites and museums, that’s why they are so interested in visiting them. The same actions can be done for local
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. By giving them information about
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like galleries or museums and explaining how interesting they are, citizens with
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knowledge are more likely to visit
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places
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. AD on national channels or banners in residential buildings can be taken into consideration to increase the attendance of local
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in famous
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of a city. In conclusion, the rise of interest in major tourist attractions among local
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can be achieved by promoting
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places
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. Giving
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knowledge of how interesting local
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can be will boost the numbers of visitors, especially native ones.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Take for granted
  • Economical constraints
  • Routine obligations
  • Programming
  • Cater
  • Engagement
  • Community involvement
  • Personal connection
  • Cultural relevance
  • Discounts
  • Sense of ownership
  • Interactive exhibits
  • Local traditions
  • Field trips
  • Cultural bond
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