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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?

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There are different opinions about the
subject
that is
 more important for
students
 to learn. Some people say that history is the most important
subject
 because it is important to understand the background of the
country
 that we lived in.
However
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 others say
science
 and
technology
 are more important because they are useful in
this
 century. I
also
 agree with that statement. On
one
Correct article usage
the one
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 hand, some people say that history is the most important
subject
 that
students
 learn in school. It is important to understand the background of the
country
 that we lived in from the history
subject
.
Students
 must know how the heroes try to
defended
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defend
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 our countries from the colonists in the past. If the
students
 know about it, they will have the spirit that the heroes used to have. They will have
the
Correct article usage
a
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 nationalism feeling and love their
country
 so much. From that
nationalism
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 feeling, they will try to do their best for the
country
 and fight for it when someone says bad things about their
country
.
On the other hand
, others say that
technology
 and
science
 are the most important subjects to learn in school. It is because
science
 and
technology
 are very useful in
this
 century.
Science
 and
technology
 are rapidly evolving
in
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over
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years
Correct article usage
the years
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. So, to catch up with the new ones,
students
 must learn about
it
Correct pronoun usage
them
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.
Furthermore
,
students
 can contribute their knowledge about
science
 and
technology
 if they find something new. To do that, they have to learn about it in the first place. In short, there are different opinions about what subjects are the most important thing to learn in school. In my opinion,
technology
 and
science
 are the most important ones because we can’t live without them nowadays.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural heritage
  • Historical perspective
  • Analytical skills
  • Contextual understanding
  • Technological advancements
  • STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, Mathematics)
  • Innovation
  • Interdisciplinary
  • Job market
  • Climate crisis
  • Cultural identity
  • Critical thinking
  • Humanities
  • Contemporary issues
  • Integration
  • Tech-savvy
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