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nNowadays, more and more children play computer games. Why do you think this is the case? Is it a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays technological advancement offers a range of electric gadgets which serve a variety of
games
 from them some
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belong to mind development and others are just for entertainment. To some
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 it has
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 and bright side which I discuss in
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parents work full time , so when they come back home they need relaxation in
this
 situation computer is one of the best ways to keep their children busy. In some ,cases
this
 is the way to develop their critical thinking, decision making and multi-tasking skill by playing some mind-developing
games
. ,
Also
 few
games
 are
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 as word puzzles which enhance their vocabulary. On the dark side, as we can see so many children suffering from child obesity, sit longer in front of the screen they rarely do physical activities which
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 the fat in their body. ,
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 that screen damages their eyes as well. Sometimes they forget to be social which keeps them far from society. In ,conclusion every matter has two sides one coin. Though it has immense benefits of computer
games
 in the near future they totally damage the physical and mental health of children. Parents should limit their screen time.
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