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whether punishing driving offences heavily is the most crucial factor when it comes to reducing
traffic
accidents. In my opinion,
while
strict
punishments
can deter some of the
offenders
, I think other
measures
are more crucial in
road
safety
.
On the one hand, it is argued that the
government
should make those who break the
traffic
rules pay for their deeds. Examples of strict
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to be taken are fining them a large
amount
of money, sending them to jail for a short period of confinement, and making them do voluntary work in the community compulsorily. If the
government
carried out
such
measures
, some of the driving
offenders
would have to think twice before they take careless actions.
Nevertheless
, others believe that there will be limited effects if strict
punishments
are conducted solely. They hold the viewpoint that more effective
measures
should be taken. The root of the issue of
road
safety
lies not only in the
traffic
law breakers.
For
example
, the
traffic
lights
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sometimes set an unreasonable waiting time for drivers to pass the intersection, which leads to a very long queue down the
road
.
As a result
, some people violate the
traffic
regulations simply because they are in an emergency and they cannot afford to wait any longer.
Therefore
, it would be unfair to force them to pay a considerable
amount
number of fines. Apart from the design of the
traffic
lights
, some roads that have poor infrastructure
also
need to be improved. Take the
road
next to my house as an
example
, there are no distinct
punishments
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deter some of the
offenders
, I think other
measures
are more crucial in
road
safety
.
On the one hand, it is argued that the
government
should make those who break the
traffic
rules pay for their deeds. Examples of strict
measureFix the agreement mistake
show examples
to be taken are fining them a large
amount
of money, sending them to jail for a short period of confinement, and making them do voluntary work in the community compulsorily. If the
government
carried out
such
measures
, some of the driving
offenders
would have to think twice before they take careless actions.
Nevertheless
, others believe that there will be limited effects if strict
punishments
are conducted solely. They hold the viewpoint that more effective
measures
should be taken. The root of the issue of
road
safety
lies not only in the
traffic
law breakers.
For
example
, the
traffic
lights
are Unnecessary verb
show examples
sometimes set an unreasonable waiting time for drivers to pass the intersection, which leads to a very long queue down the
road
.
As a result
, some people violate the
traffic
regulations simply because they are in an emergency and they cannot afford to wait any longer.
Therefore
, it would be unfair to force them to pay a considerable
amount
number of fines. Apart from the design of the
traffic
lights
, some roads that have poor infrastructure
also
need to be improved. Take the
road
next to my house as an
example
, there
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no distinct separation between the vehicles and passengers, resulting in a higher risk
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safety
. Without clear guidance on the
road
, cars and people on the street are more likely to collide with each other, causing severe damage to both sides.
In conclusion, giving heavy punishment to drivers who deliberately and frequently offend the
traffic
laws
areCorrect subject-verb agreement
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necessary, but I consider it more important to enhance the design of
traffic
lights
and infrastructure of the current
road
system.