Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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whether punishing driving offences heavily is the most crucial factor when it comes to reducing

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accidents. In my opinion,

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strict

punishments

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can deter some of the

offenders

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, I think other

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are more crucial in

road

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safety

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. On the one hand, it is argued that the

government

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should make those who break the

traffic

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rules pay for their deeds. Examples of strict

measure

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to be taken are fining them a large

amount

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of money, sending them to jail for a short period of confinement, and making them do voluntary work in the community compulsorily. If the

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carried out

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measures

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, some of the driving

offenders

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would have to think twice before they take careless actions.

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, others believe that there will be limited effects if strict

punishments

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are conducted solely. They hold the viewpoint that more effective

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should be taken. The root of the issue of

road

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safety

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lies not only in the

traffic

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law breakers.

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example

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, the

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lights

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are

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sometimes set an unreasonable waiting time for drivers to pass the intersection, which leads to a very long queue down the

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.

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, some people violate the

traffic

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regulations simply because they are in an emergency and they cannot afford to wait any longer.

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, it would be unfair to force them to pay a considerable

amount

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number of fines. Apart from the design of the

traffic

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lights

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, some roads that have poor infrastructure

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need to be improved. Take the

road

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next to my house as an

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, there are no distinct

punishments

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can

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deter some of the

offenders

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, I think other

measures

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are more crucial in

road

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safety

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. On the one hand, it is argued that the

government

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should make those who break the

traffic

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rules pay for their deeds. Examples of strict

measure

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measures

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to be taken are fining them a large

amount

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of money, sending them to jail for a short period of confinement, and making them do voluntary work in the community compulsorily. If the

government

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carried out

such

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measures

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, some of the driving

offenders

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would have to think twice before they take careless actions.

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, others believe that there will be limited effects if strict

punishments

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are conducted solely. They hold the viewpoint that more effective

measures

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should be taken. The root of the issue of

road

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safety

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lies not only in the

traffic

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law breakers.

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example

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, the

traffic

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lights

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are

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apply

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sometimes set an unreasonable waiting time for drivers to pass the intersection, which leads to a very long queue down the

road

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.

As a result

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, some people violate the

traffic

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regulations simply because they are in an emergency and they cannot afford to wait any longer.

Therefore

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, it would be unfair to force them to pay a considerable

amount

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number of fines. Apart from the design of the

traffic

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lights

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, some roads that have poor infrastructure

also

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need to be improved. Take the

road

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next to my house as an

example

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, there

are

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no distinct separation between the vehicles and passengers, resulting in a higher risk

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safety

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. Without clear guidance on the

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, cars and people on the street are more likely to collide with each other, causing severe damage to both sides. In conclusion, giving heavy punishment to drivers who deliberately and frequently offend the

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laws

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necessary, but I consider it more important to enhance the design of

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lights

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and infrastructure of the current

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system.