The bar charts show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts compare the occupation status of
graduates
and postgraduates in the UK who did not work
as a full-time employee
after graduation, in 2008.
Fix the agreement mistake
employees
Overall
, most of both graduates
and postgraduates students decided to continue their studies, whereas
working as a volunteer was the least popular option among them.
If we look at the chart for graduates
, it is evident that almost 30,000 continued to study. The second most popular destination was to work
in a part-time job, by 17,735. Only a small number of them decided to participate in voluntary work
, with 3,500. It is also
notable that marginally above 15,000 graduates
were unemployed back then
, in 2008.
Looking at the occupation status of the postgraduates who did not get involved in full-time work
, it is noticeable that although
the number of people whose status was described in the chart was considerably less than graduates
, the ranking followed the same pattern. To explain more, most of them decided to study further
, 2,752. The second most chosen path was to be occupied with a part-time job, at 2,535. Only 345 people decided to work
voluntarily, while
1,625 of them were labelled as "unoccupied".Submitted by athena.karimzadeh on
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