Government should spend money on railways than roads. To what extent so you agree or disagree with the statement.

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that
,
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it is important for Government to use more resources in constructing railways
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of roads.
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agree
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with the above state in the sense that it will ease the transportation of certain goods and reduce traffic jam. In recent times , roads do not
last
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long
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heavy weight
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vehicles and goods being transported on
daily
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basis. These trends
forms
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pod
hooles
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holes
which causes accident and loss of lives and properties.
these incidence
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can be
avioded
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avoided
if more railways are being built that will convey products which exert more weight on road tracks,
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.
Pertoleum
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Petroleum
and containers,
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reducing the formation of pod holes and decreasing the
occurance
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occurrence
of accidents.
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,
constructing
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of
railway
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will be more beneficial in enhancing
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traffic system which will ease stress and improve the activities of daily living of the common man,
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to say, there be
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punctuality
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in their various place of work and parents can go home early.
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, in some big cities in
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developing
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, people spend hours
on
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traffic,
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going about their businesses late which
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negatuvde
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negative
effects on them and their families.
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, linking railways across states make it easy for
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travel, whereby family member
friends
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can
vist
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visit
each other
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maintaining relationships and bonding. Conclusively, it is of uttermost
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for money should be allocated
in
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building
railway
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instead
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roads for there will be
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in expressway accidents,
gridlock
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.and enhance household relationships.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainability
  • environmental footprint
  • efficiency
  • pollution
  • cost-effectiveness
  • economic development
  • accessibility
  • public transportation
  • congestion
  • air pollution
  • initial investment
  • maintenance
  • upgrades
  • rural
  • urban
  • last-mile connectivity
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