The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?

Some
people
argue that if the
poructs
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products
will many sell, that the natural would have
damge
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damage
damaged
by the production.I strongly believe that
people
's little
action
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can decrease the damage. Nowadays, the number of
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damage increasing have a lot of reasons. The product increase to sell.
That is
mean the
products
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product
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pakages
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packages
incresed
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increased
increase
too. Almost
pakages
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packages
are consist
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of
pollution
such
as plastics,
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and vynls
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vynls
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vinyls
vines
.
For example
,
smartphone
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smartphones
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make new
version
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versions
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around by every year in several companies.So,
people
buy
the
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new smartphone by every year
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including
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pakages
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packages
and components too. The phone selling figure will be over 1 million in one year. As
result
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, we have many charging
line
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lines
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and
other component
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.
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do
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not useful everywhere. At that time, they will be the
pollution
. The
pollution
goes to
natural
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.
that is
negative effect reasons.
However
, if the companies try to change their selling products
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packages. And, if that product's components will
be consist
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of more simple. The
pollustion
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pollution
would
be significantly decrease
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. And, we should try to
reclyle
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recycle
recall
their
pakages
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packages
shch
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such
as papers and
plactics
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plastics
.
Also
, old devices should
reclyle
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recycle
too.
Although
that is
a small action, that
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effect
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is very big
spectially
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specially
especially
for the natural environment.
The companies
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and
people
both should try to decrease damage to
the
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natural
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.The natural have rent by them who the future children. Therebefore, we should use to careful the natural. The mentioned above, the increase in
the products
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pollution
,
that
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we can solve the problems. if everybody simple action of just
reclyle
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recycle
.
That is
very easy.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • production
  • consumer goods
  • natural environment
  • damage
  • causes
  • overconsumption
  • demand
  • environmental regulations
  • enforcement
  • natural resources
  • industrial pollution
  • waste
  • inadequate
  • waste management practices
  • public awareness
  • education
  • sustainable alternatives
  • stricter environmental laws
  • recycling
  • responsible consumption
  • clean technologies
  • renewable energy
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