The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This
bar chart illustrates British Linking Words
Emigration
to five countries from 2004 to 2006.the Use synonyms
overall
trend shown in the data is a steep rise in Linking Words
AUSTRAALIA
, Correct your spelling
AUSTRALIA
coupled with
a decline in NEW Linking Words
ZEALAND
.
If we compare Use synonyms
between
AUSTRALIA and SPAIN notice that in 2005 the Change preposition
apply
emigration
in AUSTRALIA reached Use synonyms
highs
Fix the agreement mistake
high
50
thousand, Change preposition
of 50
in addition
, in 2007 there was a slight fall in Linking Words
emigration
, but Use synonyms
emigration
Use synonyms
an
increased in 2004. Correct article usage
apply
For example
, Linking Words
the
Correct article usage
apply
emigration
in 2005 experienced a slight fall. If we compare the Use synonyms
emigration
of Spain to the Use synonyms
emigration
of FRANCE, we notice that there was Use synonyms
shot
up from 20 to 40 in 2005. Correct article usage
a shot
Furthermore
, in SPAIN there was stability during the period from 2004 to 2005. Unlike in Linking Words
2007
we can see to Add a comma
,2007
plunged
.
It is interesting to notice that Change the form of the verb
plunge
the
in NEW Correct article usage
apply
ZEALAND
the emendation in decreased. Use synonyms
Such
as in 2007 reaching 20 Linking Words
Linking Words
also
in 2006 to 21. spcequntly, there was a sudden drop in Correct word choice
and also
USA
by 2007 but in 2006 Correct article usage
the USA
the
Correct article usage
apply
emigration
improves in UAS, Use synonyms
whereas
in NEW Linking Words
ZEALAND
Use synonyms
was
roes. Change the verb form
were
For instance
, in 2004 there was Linking Words
go
down but in Change the form of the verb
going
USA
experienced Correct article usage
the USA
rise
.
In conclusion, Add an article
a rise
although
Linking Words
AUSTRAALIA
over the period given an increase in yearly income, the yearly income of NEW Correct your spelling
AUSTRALIA
ZEALAND
a reduction.Use synonyms
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