"the graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three Metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant"
The line chart illustrates the differences
of
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in
price
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prices
in
copper, nickel and zinc in the Change preposition
of
year
of
2014.
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Overall
, there was a slight decrease of
nickel and copper Change preposition
in
prices
, whereas
the prices
of zinc increased slowly. Furthermore
, there was a general fluctuation in prices
but the first half of the year
witnessed somewhat expensive prices
. In contrast
, the
from July and afterwards, the Correct article usage
apply
prices
were a bit cheaper and started going down till December.
Regarding the
copper Correct article usage
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prices
, it has overwhelmingly decline
by around 9% from January to July. It has slightly grown up by 2% after 2 months, Wrong verb form
declined
then
remained the same September
and Change preposition
in September
finally
ending
up with a Wrong verb form
ended
grew
up of 3% from October to December.
The Nickel Change the form of the verb
growing
prices
was
generally fluctuating as it was approximately Change the verb form
were
collapse
by less than% till June and moderately returned to almost the same price Wrong verb form
collapsed
at the end
of the year
.
Finally
, Zinc prices
opened the year
by
a surprising 2% climb Change preposition
with
however
it
noticed a gradual decline in June and almost remained steady until October. There was Correct pronoun usage
they
an
notable rise in Change the article
a
last
3 months by around 4%.Correct article usage
the last
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, prices with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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