"the graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three Metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant"
The line chart illustrates the differences
of
Change preposition
in
price
Fix the agreement mistake
prices
in
copper, nickel and zinc in the Change preposition
of
year
Use synonyms
of
2014.
Change preposition
apply
Overall
, there was a slight decrease Linking Words
of
nickel and copper Change preposition
in
prices
, Use synonyms
whereas
the Linking Words
prices
of zinc increased slowly. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, there was a general fluctuation in Linking Words
prices
but the first half of the Use synonyms
year
witnessed somewhat expensive Use synonyms
prices
. Use synonyms
In contrast
, Linking Words
the
from July and afterwards, the Correct article usage
apply
prices
were a bit cheaper and started going down till December.
Regarding Use synonyms
the
copper Correct article usage
apply
prices
, it has overwhelmingly Use synonyms
decline
by around 9% from January to July. It has slightly grown up by 2% after 2 months, Wrong verb form
declined
then
remained the same Linking Words
September
and Change preposition
in September
finally
Linking Words
ending
up with a Wrong verb form
ended
grew
up of 3% from October to December.
The Nickel Change the form of the verb
growing
prices
Use synonyms
was
generally fluctuating as it was approximately Change the verb form
were
collapse
by less than% till June and moderately returned to almost the same price Wrong verb form
collapsed
at the end
of the Linking Words
year
.
Use synonyms
Finally
, Zinc Linking Words
prices
opened the Use synonyms
year
Use synonyms
by
a surprising 2% climb Change preposition
with
however
Linking Words
it
noticed a gradual decline in June and almost remained steady until October. There was Correct pronoun usage
they
an
notable rise in Change the article
a
Linking Words
last
3 months by around 4%.Correct article usage
the last
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, prices with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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