The chart below shows the amount of energy generated from wind in four countries from 1985 to 2000.
The bar graph illustrates the comparison
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wind
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energy
generation in four countries ; Use synonyms
India
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Denmark
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Germany
and the United States in the year from 1985 to 2000.
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Overall
, we can see that the united states had Linking Words
genereated
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generated
wind
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energy
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in
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the
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wind
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energy
.
In 1985 , Use synonyms
India
and Use synonyms
Denmark
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were generate
200 Change the verb form
generated
megawatts
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wind
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of wind
energy
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while
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Germany
accounted doubled of both countries . Use synonyms
However
, 1200 Linking Words
megawatts
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wind
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of wind
energy
produced by the united states Use synonyms
which
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stand
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stands
to
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at
drastic
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a drastic
of
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in
wind
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energy
in Use synonyms
Denmark
which was 60% of Use synonyms
total
and reached 1200 Add an article
the total
meagwatts
. Correct your spelling
megawatts
Likewise
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and Use synonyms
Germany
produced Use synonyms
similar
number of Change the article
a similar
the similar
megawatts
(800) .Use synonyms
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, the production of Linking Words
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energy
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Usa
that significantly increased Correct your spelling
USA
with
1600 Change preposition
by
megawatts
.
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In addition
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Denmark
experienced the most significant expansion which Use synonyms
replaced
by the USA and it stand Add a missing verb
was replaced
to
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the top
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India
and the US generated 1200 and 1500 Use synonyms
megawatts
respectively .Use synonyms
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had only 900 Use synonyms
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produced.Use synonyms
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