The chart below shows the amount of energy generated from wind in four countries from 1985 to 2000.
The bar graph illustrates the comparison
wind
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of wind
energy
generation in four countries ; India
, Denmark
, Germany
and the United States in the year from 1985 to 2000.
Overall
, we can see that the united states had genereated
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generated
wind
energy
as compared to other nations in
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Whereas
, other nations also
indicated growth of production in the
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wind
energy
.
In 1985 , India
and Denmark
were generate
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generated
megawatts
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of wind
energy
while
Germany
accounted doubled of both countries . However
, 1200 megawatts
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of wind
energy
produced by the united states which
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a drastic
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in
wind
energy
in Denmark
which was 60% of total
and reached 1200 Add an article
the total
meagwatts
. Correct your spelling
megawatts
Likewise
, India
and Germany
produced similar
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a similar
the similar
megawatts
(800) .Whereas
, the production of wind
energy
in the Usa
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USA
with
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megawatts
.
In addition
, in 2000 Denmark
experienced the most significant expansion which replaced
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was replaced
to
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India
and the US generated 1200 and 1500 megawatts
respectively .Whereas
, Germany
had only 900 megawatts
produced.Submitted by jeetkacha13 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words wind, energy, india, denmark, germany, megawatts with synonyms.
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