The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants.
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Given are the charts demonstrating the figures for gender and age distribution of adults who took part in different classes during the nighttime in 2009. -> mở bài ổn
Overall
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it is clear that
the numbers of women overtook those of men in almost all surveyed courses, except sculpture.[ar] Linking Words
In addition
, people who were aged over 50 accounted for the highest proportion of the total course Linking Words
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It is evident from the bar chart that language and drama were the most preferred subjects among female students.[as] [at]The number of adult female students was exactly twice that of their male counterparts, with 40 females in the language class compared to 20 males, and 20 females in the drama class compared to 10 males. Linking Words
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, in the evening painting session, there were more female Linking Words
participants
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participants
(25). Use synonyms
Conversely
, in the sculpture sessions, the participation of males was higher, with 10 attendees, approximately double the number of female Linking Words
participants
, which was only 5. ⇒ ok nhé
Shifting the focus to the pie chart, individuals aged over 50 constituted the largest segment, accounting for 42% of the total Use synonyms
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while
the smallest proportion was among those under 20 years old, making up only 5% of the total. [au]The age groups of Linking Words
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in their 20s and 30s represented 11% and 16% of the total course attendees, respectively.Use synonyms
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