The graph below shows the population figures of different types of turtles in India between 1980 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the population

figures of different types of turtles in India

between 1980 and 2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The given graph chart represents data about 4 different
species
of
turtles
in India and their population from 1980 to 2012. It can be clearly seen that Olive Ridley
turtles
are rising in numbers
while
others remain on the same
lever
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level
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or even decreasing in population. In 1980 all types of
animal
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animals
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have the same
number
which is about 100. For the next 5
years
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their index increased and the
number
became 110. For the following 12
years
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,years
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there was a huge growth in
figure
for Olive Ridley
turtles
compared to other
species
. They peaked at
point
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of 135.
While
Leatherback
Turtles
had a
steadily
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fall and
figure
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the figure
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in 1998 was about 90. The trend of falling
number
remained on
this
type and in 2012 it was almost 55
species
overall
. The All
Species
graph line experienced fluctuations during the whole period of time and the total
number
in 2012 was 111.The same pattern was applied
for
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Green
turtles
. In the
last
year
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the
overall
figure
was approximately 90.
To conclude
, the Leatherback type of
turtles
experienced
the
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significant fall. The
number
of them became two times less.
However
, Olive Ridley
turtles
increased in its
figure
for
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about 35 .
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall, while".
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words species, turtles, number, figure with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.

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