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The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The data illustrates the yearly
production
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 of
milk
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 (in
litres
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) in four specific
countries
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 in 1990, 2000 and 2010. The participating
countries
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 are the
Netherlands
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, Australia, Tanzania and Guatemala.
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, what stands out from the table is that the
Netherlands
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 was the leading producer of
milk
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while
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,
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 Guatemala was the least producer. The information
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 depicts that all
countries
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' has seen growth
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 their manufactured
milk
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 except for, Australia which experienced a decrease in the amount of
milk
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 produced. In the initial year, the
Netherlands
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 produced around 11,200,00
litres
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 of
milk
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while
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 Guatemala only released around 26,000
litres
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.
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, Guatemalan
production
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 of
milk
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 steadily increases throughout the given period and reaches its highest
production
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 at 84,000
litres
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, a small fraction compared to the other
countries
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.
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, the
Netherlands
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 stays as the chief manufacturer notwithstanding, the fall in the amount produced in 2000. In more detail, Tanzania significantly increased their
production
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.The increase was approximately 60,000
litres
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 in the final year.
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, Australia witnessed a descending trend in their sale from 11,246,000 in 1990 to 9,165,000 in 2010
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, milk, litres, countries, netherlands with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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