The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The data illustrates the yearly
production
of
milk
(in
litres
) in four specific
countries
in 1990, 2000 and 2010. The participating
countries
are the
Netherlands
, Australia, Tanzania and Guatemala.
Overall
, what stands out from the table is that the
Netherlands
was the leading producer of
milk
while
,
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Guatemala was the least producer. The information
also
depicts that all
countries
' has seen growth
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their manufactured
milk
except for, Australia which experienced a decrease in the amount of
milk
produced. In the initial year, the
Netherlands
produced around 11,200,00
litres
of
milk
while
Guatemala only released around 26,000
litres
.
However
, Guatemalan
production
of
milk
steadily increases throughout the given period and reaches its highest
production
at 84,000
litres
although
, a small fraction compared to the other
countries
.
In addition
, the
Netherlands
stays as the chief manufacturer notwithstanding, the fall in the amount produced in 2000. In more detail, Tanzania significantly increased their
production
.The increase was approximately 60,000
litres
in the final year.
On the other hand
, Australia witnessed a descending trend in their sale from 11,246,000 in 1990 to 9,165,000 in 2010
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